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Twilight Velvet and Twilight Sparkle.
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Critique by Twilight-Changeling Apr 26, 2013, 7:47:42 AM
I really like the style of this, I like that the lines aren't smoothed out and their manes and tails are messy, but similar enough so you can see mother-daughter resemblance. I like the idea behind this, because usually we see Twilight Sparkle going to Princess Celestia for motherly support, but I like that she goes to her actual mother this time, strengthening the bond that a mother should have with her daughter.
The leg proportions are perfect, I think. The flanks cutely round downward and then flare outward into adorable marshmallowy-like hooves, and think that's the cutest thing about this. Just the simple cuteness provides a strong feel to this piece with not much detail.

One thing I do have a problem with is the horns. I feel like they are angled awkwardly. They look almost perpendicular to the face, instead of the 45 degrees that unicorn horns usually have.

But I think this drawing is super cute! :thumbsup: Keep on drawing, my friend! ;)
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:iconkyliethezephyr:
this was kinda interesting except i don't think you should have bent Twilight Sparkles leg that way because it seems a little to unnatural also yo u should shade because it adds a lot lot of depth to you drawing. like for example you could have shaded where twilight velvet's tail is because there would be a shadow there depending on what position the light source would be in.I am sorry if this seems really harsh this is a good piece and it has the potential to be more awesome than it already is :D. i look forward to seeing more of your drawings
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:iconjonup:
Jonup Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
nice
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:icondash4700:
Dash4700 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I LOVE this!! Great style, and Twilight's mom is very well done!
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:iconsomeblockhead:
SomeBlockhead Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014   Filmographer
Love this style of art, and specially that cute filly Twilight :)
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:iconthegodsquadalphateam:
TheGodSquadAlphaTeam Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The way their manes are a bit scruffy, It looks like they would live in a dangerous world. Looks like Twilight Velvet is going to bust out some high-velocity magic power.
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:icondragonjek:
Dragonjek Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Do not mess with foals in front of their parents.  This should be basic logic, off-screen asshole.
Mothers win.  And when they lose, they still win because their kid almost universally survives.
And then comes back for vengeance.
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:iconnina-dragons-12:
Nina-Dragons-12 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
true true
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:iconpytko3:
pytko3 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Not bad.Nod 
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:icontumtiger:
Tumtiger Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Velvet's about to get medieval on some dumbass me thinks.
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:icon19jburner:
19jburner Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Badass mom of OP family is badass.
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:icongjtproductions:
GJTProductions Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014
There's something in her genetics, I swear. Son can shield a whole freakin' city, daughter can learn any and all types of magic (and eventually gets a set of wings!)... that ain't coincidence, I'm sure of that.
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:iconrowanheart1090:
Rowanheart1090 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That really is just too cute!
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:iconmc-ryan:
Mc-Ryan Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nothings gonna stop a mother so determined to protect their baby
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For sure =)
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:iconmoppypuppy:
MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Twilight stole cookies, and now Twilight's drunken father wants to teach her a lesson she'll never forget.
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Too bad story, I believe in better things =)
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:iconya5la:
ya5la Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!
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:iconmoppypuppy:
MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Twilight Velvet looks so badass that it actually overshadows Twilight's cuteness.
That isn't easy.
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm proud =)
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:iconjasonsoniczombie:
JasonSonicZombie Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Adorable! Poor Twily!
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:icondarrin-s:
Darrin-S Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks fantastic, I really like it.
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:iconczair:
cZair Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Are you able to do Firefly and filly Rainbow Dash?
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:iconbunnysouffle:
BunnySouffle Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So Kawaii <3 Don't mess with twilight, or you'll get the wrath of Twilight Velvet!
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
cool
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:iconmatt21:
matt21 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*O*
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:iconggunsailor:
Ggunsailor Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Writer
I really, REALLY like this! Twilight Velvet is definitely a pony NOT TO BE MESSED WITH.
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah!)
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:iconggunsailor:
Ggunsailor Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Writer
What exactly is happening in this picture?
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Imagination - ON. =)
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:iconnarcilius:
Narcilius Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
love the style, the eyes, and it is really cute

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:iconnightwolflover:
NightWolfLover Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sassy Velvet
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:icondrgnwolf:
Drgnwolf Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
I just finished watching Taken 2. Seeing Velvet's expression, I can't stop myself from imagining her being a secret agent out to save what threatens her daughter xD
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:iconmeowlody-meow:
Meowlody-meow Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Twilight is super-ultra-cute
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She is =)
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:iconamrasfelagund:
AmrasFelagund Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
"Get behind me, Twilight," Velvet said, her foal already placing a foreleg around her mother's hindlegs, to shelter underneath her tail.
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:iconbrother-malachai:
Brother-Malachai Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
Hnnng! So cute! XD
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:iconlorddivinity:
LordDivinity Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Twilight's mum looks so dam awesome xD
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:iconlubie-kisiel:
lubie-kisiel Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oh my Gosh, it's so adorable c:
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:iconkeybladeknight99:
KeybladeKnight99 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student Writer
Badass Momma Mode, Activated.
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:iconcjllatt:
cjllatt Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Considering how strong Twilight and Shining are, i've always wondered how strong their mom was. For some reason, i picture Velvet having Lightning from FF13's voice telling Twilight to get behind her since something's about to go down. Very awesome work :3.
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spyrofan923 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
Well Twilight's mom Is based on Twilight from Generation 1 of MLP. So if she fought Tirek, she's gotta be hella strong. And it could explain why her children have a lot of power as well. It makes more sense if it were genetic then if it was just a mere coincidence.
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:iconya-rina:
ya-RInA Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks so simple but so amazing :wow: I like their poses, they are very natural. Mother is ready to protect her child... :aww:
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:icondoctoroctagonapus21:
Doctoroctagonapus21 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Bitch, you did NOT just insult my daughter."
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:icontwilightismagic:
TwilightIsMagic Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student General Artist
The unsure and even scared little Twi and the way she tries to hold on to her mother's hoof. That decidedly motherly, clear-eyed and confident look said mother has about herself. It's in everything, from pose to hair position to expression to those eyes to those ears, in both of them.
I simply love your style, maker. Well done!
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:iconpunisher143:
Punisher143 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
I just love the way this looks.
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:iconlightf4lls:
lightf4lls Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love the expressions and poses on these two, conveys the mood of the picture very well.
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many thanks =)
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:iconcigarscigarettes:
CigarsCigarettes Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
Velvet you are one badass momma!
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:icon19jburner:
19jburner Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
twilight: mommy..?
velvet: dont worry hun, i got you *while looking sexy as hell*
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:iconashoof:
Ashoof Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
what an excellent picture :) i wish i understood art better to tell you why i love this so much. its really great is alli can muster.
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:iconquent0s:
Quent0S Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, I went ahead and vectored this. Is it OK with you if I upload it?
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