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Danger by Kejzfox Danger by Kejzfox
Twilight Velvet and Twilight Sparkle.
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Critique by Twilight-Changeling Apr 26, 2013, 7:47:42 AM
I really like the style of this, I like that the lines aren't smoothed out and their manes and tails are messy, but similar enough so you can see mother-daughter resemblance. I like the idea behind this, because usually we see Twilight Sparkle going to Princess Celestia for motherly support, but I like that she goes to her actual mother this time, strengthening the bond that a mother should have with her daughter.
The leg proportions are perfect, I think. The flanks cutely round downward and then flare outward into adorable marshmallowy-like hooves, and think that's the cutest thing about this. Just the simple cuteness provides a strong feel to this piece with not much detail.

One thing I do have a problem with is the horns. I feel like they are angled awkwardly. They look almost perpendicular to the face, instead of the 45 degrees that unicorn horns usually have.

But I think this drawing is super cute! :thumbsup: Keep on drawing, my friend! ;)
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this was kinda interesting except i don't think you should have bent Twilight Sparkles leg that way because it seems a little to unnatural also yo u should shade because it adds a lot lot of depth to you drawing. like for example you could have shaded where twilight velvet's tail is because there would be a shadow there depending on what position the light source would be in.I am sorry if this seems really harsh this is a good piece and it has the potential to be more awesome than it already is :D. i look forward to seeing more of your drawings
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:icontumtiger:
Tumtiger Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Velvet's about to get medieval on some dumbass me thinks.
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19jburner Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Badass mom of OP family is badass.
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Rowanheart1090 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That really is just too cute!
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:iconmc-ryan:
Mc-Ryan Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nothings gonna stop a mother so determined to protect their baby
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For sure =)
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MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Twilight stole cookies, and now Twilight's drunken father wants to teach her a lesson she'll never forget.
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:iconkejzfox:
Kejzfox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Too bad story, I believe in better things =)
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ya5la Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!
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MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Twilight Velvet looks so badass that it actually overshadows Twilight's cuteness.
That isn't easy.
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Kejzfox Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm proud =)
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